ext_93769 ([identity profile] citosol.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] oltha_heri 2009-02-04 08:30 pm (UTC)

Loved this! I love Reese being so "homelike" with Charlie! I really liked this part:
"She hummed in response turning her head over to look at him as they languished in the easy after glow. "Ted's scared of you." Dani's eyebrows scrunched together and she pulled a pillow more firmly under her head"
It feels so natural...like they really ARE a couple and sleeps together regularly.

:)

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