ext_280905 ([identity profile] 15lbpurebunny.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] oltha_heri 2009-01-31 01:52 am (UTC)

Ah, I really liked this one.

"But the way he's staring at her with the mixture of a newborn's wonderment and a cynic's knowledge..."

That totally captures Charlie.

I also think you have a really good Dani voice. I am looking forward to the next installment! ;)

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