posted by [identity profile] oltha_heri.livejournal.com at 06:37pm on 02/03/2009
h these are hot! ok here we go...

1 the image is too light and fuzzy to stand out against the black border and the text is just a further distraction, to me
I know, I had like the first 10 of these done, and then didn't like them so I went back to try and make them better, and I think I made them worse.

8 FONT WIN FONT WIN FONT PLACEMENT WIN TOO nd nice colour; 9 GORGEOUS colour and comp it looks like a renaissance screen!; 10 BW QUEEN, so gorgeous,nice ampersand;

11 too fuzzzzzzy nice image and colouring but again overwhelmed by that border;
I keep trying to play with textures and sometimes it works... and sometimes....

28 lovely comp!!! but maybe a bit of a closer erase on his head;
Fucking blonds are impossible to erase, it is so hard to tell what is hair and what is sky... stupid pretty boy.

33 the font colour is a little hard, maye white? or maybe that would make it look too washed ou;
I was trying hard not to use white text, even though in some places it probably would've been appropriate.

36 love this one and the conspiratorial feeling;
They're plotting to overthrow the Pendragons and become the awesomest Queens of Camelot - EVER!

60 not so good but still good;
60 is one of those icons where I just wanted to finish (I save my icons in tens, so I only save things at 10, 20, 30, 40 etc).
61 a bit harsh on the erasing but looovely comp;
No erasing: the red's a texture.

76 isn't that, uh, blade runner? (BELEIVE IT OR NOT I JUST READ DICK'S NOVELLA NEVER SEEN THE FILM SO PLZ DONT SPOIL IT)
I've never seen the movie, it just came in a texture set and given the future of these guys, it seemed appropriate.

your work has always improved so much faster
It's only because I got rejected form the elite comm and they were really good in their critique so I was focusing on that. I'm glad it worked.

ALso OMG, you have never reviewed anything this quickly and thoroughly... ever.

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